Saturday, August 29, 2009

Fox!

Silverstar wakes up to splashing and hissing. Runs out of nursery to see foxes led by a..........kittypet! Runs back into nursery and says,"Mothfang, Songbird, stay here with the kits." Runs out and a grayish-red fox launches on top of her. Silverstar aims at the fox's throat, but misses and sinks teeth into his scruff. In an uneven match, Silverstar gets thrown off. Thunderspirit and Blazefoot see and attack the fox. She looks frantically around for someone to get help and sees Moonmist fighting. Silverstar sprints over and claws the she-fox's muzzle. "Your not taking my sister!" she screams. The fox runs out of camp. Then Silverstar says,"Moonmist, go to BriarClan for help." She nodded and shot off. Then she saw that Thunderspirit and Blazefoot had chased away the the large male fox, and were creeping up behind the kittypet who had Onecloud pinned down. As they got ready to pounce, Silverstar whispered, "Oh, no.............." as she saw that the big white tom with a black leg, who is actually a rouge, didn't have regular claws and reminded her of a cat in nursery tales.

-Silverstar

13 comments:

  1. Briarclan is here! (more cats rush into the clearing) (swiftstar jumps on the male fox's back and starts shreeding.)

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  2. *throws himself in battel*

    GET OUT OF HERE YOU FLEE BITTEN FURBALLS

    *pounces on a fox's back and bites down hard on his throat,the fox dashes out of camp yelping*

    HAHA YOU BETTER RUN!!

    *a huge bright red fox leaps on Dustfang,and bites his scruff,then flings him to the other side of camp,where he lays motienless in the dust*

    ~Dustfang

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  3. DUSTFANG NOO!!!

    ~Mothfang~

    *twiches when he hears Mothfangs panicked voice*
    Im still here darling
    ~Dustfang

    Thank Starclan!! Get in the nursery and protect your kits!! Ill take your place out here!!
    ~Mothfang

    Okay
    *crawls into nursery*
    ~Dustfang

    *pounces onto the bright red fox and slashes his throat*

    THATS FOR HURTING DUSTFANG!!

    *tackels fox to the floor and rakes her claws against his flank untill fox runs out of camp*

    HA!

    *sees pale red fox break into nursery and fling Dustfang out of the way*

    MY KITS!! MY DUSTFANG!!

    *dashes toward nursery only to be stoped by the rouge*
    ~Mothfang

    Oh No you Dont
    ~Rouge

    *rouge leaps onto Mothfangs back but Mothfang slides under him and bites him on the tail when suddenly a flash of brown whizzes past her nose*
    ~Mothfang~

    GO SAVE OUR KITS!!
    ~Dustfang

    *dashes toward nursery once again,and this time leaps on fox and scratches face,and accidentally scratches on of her eyes out*

    Opps...

    *fox roars in agony and flees out of camp*

    *scrambles into nursery to check on kits*
    ~Mothfang

    MAMA WHAT WAS THAT!! A BIG RED THING THAT SMELLED LIKE CROWFOOD REACHED IN AND TOOK DADDY AND BROWNKIT!!
    ~Poppykit

    its okay okay...wait HE TOOK BROWNKIT??
    ~Mothfang

    YEAH AFTER HE TOOK DADDY HE REACHED IN AND TOOK HIM,AND THEN HANDED HIM TO..TO..TO..
    ~Whitekit

    TO WHO????
    ~Mothfang

    I think to a kittypet...he didnt smell like a clan cat.
    ~Whitekit

    Oh GREAT STARCLAN!
    I want all of you to stick together okay? Ill be right back
    *sprints out of nursery and trys to find the rouge*
    ~Mothfang

    WHAT ARE YOU DONING OUT HERE GO BACK INTO THE NURSERY!!
    ~Dustfang

    THAT FLEE BITEN ROUGE TOOK BROWNKIT!!
    ~Mothfang

    WHAT!!?? ILL LOOK FOR HIM YOU GO BACK TO THE NURSERY
    ~Dustfang

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  4. *dashes in nursery*

    okay come on follow me

    *Mothfang and kits make their way into the deepest corner of the nursery*

    If a fox or a rouge come be extra quite,but if they see us im gonna fight it then I want you,kits,to go into Silverstars den ill be in their shortly okay?
    ~Mothfang

    O-okay Mama
    ~Poppykit

    Nods
    ~Whitekit

    For Brownkit!
    ~Greykit

    Wait now wait a mintute Brownkits not dead
    ~Mothfang

    Well...lets face it hes not gonna live
    ~Greykit

    Whos be telling you this junk??
    ~Mothfang

    *kneads grounds with paws*
    ~Greykit

    WELL?
    ~Mothfang

    A jet black she-cat comes into my dreams and tells me awful stuff...and she told me Brownkits gonna die soon..so I thought he is gonna die today
    ~Greykit

    *thinks to herself* So that why he doesnt like to take naps
    ~Mothfang

    Yeah thats why...
    ~Greykit

    I didnt say anything.
    ~Mothfang

    I know I can read minds.
    ~Greykit

    WHAT?
    ~Mothfang

    The black she-cat said I have special powers,but she wont tell my the others.
    ~Greykit

    *fox bangs on nursery wall*

    *whispers*
    well talk about this later
    ~Mothfang

    *covers Poppykits mouth when she is about to squeak*
    ~Mothfang

    *fox breaks in and sees Mothfang and her kits*

    RUN MY KITS RUN!!!
    *leaps onto fox and claws and belly*
    ~Mothfang

    *kits dashes outside and swiftly runs to Silverstars den*

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  5. (leaps onto rouge,and sinks teeth into neek, killing him.) A ha!

    (hear a tiny squeal coming from right outside camp)

    (looks at mothfang)

    I think I mnow where brownkit is.....

    -Swiftshadow

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  6. DARKIT,WHITEKIT AND FUZZYKIT FOLLOW POPPYKIT,WHITEKIT,AND GREYKIT TO SAFTY!!

    *kits nod and dashes outside after Poppykit,Whitekit,and Greykit*

    POISENKIT,HERBKIT,AND CANERYKIT FOLLOW DARKIT,WHITEKIT,AND FUZZKIT TO SAFTEY!!

    *kits nod and follow Darkkit,Whitekit,and Fuzzkit*

    SONGBIRD,AND NEWLIGHT GET OUT OF HERE AND STAY WITH THE KITS!!

    *claws and fox untill all cats are out of nursery,then claws an eyes out of fox*

    Opps...NOT!!

    *fox screams in agony and sprints out of camp,Mothfang follows cats to Silverstar den*

    ~Mothfang~

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  7. (hawkfeater slashes a foxes nose out, and stares at fox triumphantly while It bleeds to death)

    There's only three foxes left in camp now!

    (hears a sqeual in pain, coming from a tear in the camp wall)

    I am coming!

    (it migh be too late!) He leap thrugh the gap)

    -hawkfeather

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  8. [Freezecloud jumps on a fox and slashes at his eyes.Then another cat leaps on the fox and helps Freezecloud.The other cat doesn't have a clan scent on him.He was probably a loner.Freezecloud and the cat chase the fox away.Freezecloud turns to the cat to say thanks.But instead she gasped.She knew this spunky little cat.The cat looked up at her.And tilted his head and grinned.Freezecloud couldn't believe it.She yowled her joy and threw herself at him.]

    Riverflight!You came back!I can't believe it!

    [Freezecloud licked his head fiercely.]

    It's only me Freezecloud.

    [Riverflight purred]

    It's only you!It's only you!You're my brother!I can't believe it!

    [Freezecloud purred.Riverflight looked at Freezecloud with his spunky eyes]

    I've brought someone else.

    [Freezecloud looked at him confused.]

    I don't care.It's because of you that I thought you were dead!You rush ahead without thinking!I thought you were dead!

    [Then Freezecloud stopped when she saw a gray cat walking towards her.She yowled and hurtled herself at the other tom.]

    Shadefrost!You back too!I thought you were dead like Riverflight.You followed him.Trying to get him to stop.The clan came back without you too.I was about to have kits Shadefrost.And you left me...

    [Shadefrost looked at her with sad eyes.She knew he was sorry.Freezecloud nodded her head and quickly got out of the battle with Riverflight and Shadefrost.]

    Freezecloud,Riverflight,Shadefrost

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  9. (leaps on kittypet and claws one of his eyes out.)(kittypet races out of camp)

    That'l teach ya!

    We gotta find brownkit!

    (sees tear in hole and Hawkfetaher jumpinf through it.)

    -Swiftshadow

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  10. hurry kits! into my den.

    **jumps on the last fox to help swiftstar** **sinks claws into shoulder and bites down on ear** **swiftstar lunges at the fox and claws him until he runs out of camp**

    thanks so much swiftstar we are in your debt. thanks for killing that rouge too. he reminds me of......sc-scourge, but bigger and white with a black leg instead of black with a white leg. do you think.........never mind.

    Does anyone know where Brownkit is?

    -Silverstar

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  11. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    -Poisenkit

    calm down, Poisenkit!

    -Songbird

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  12. get out of here you stuid furballs!

    -Onecloud

    whatever you do dont go in the nursury

    -Stupid Rouge

    whay why not *goes into nursery* *sees a bunch of rouges and to kits he has never seen* who are you!? get of are territory! and leave the kits!

    -Onecloud

    *all of the the rouges got off the territory exept the first one and another one*

    -pack of rouges

    *to himself* what idiots! thats what i say before battle! whatever at least most of them are off

    -Onecloud

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  13. HAS ANYONE SEEN BROWNKIT???

    *looks everywhere*

    BROWNKIT??? PLEASE!! BROWNKIT??

    ~Mothfang

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